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Could you rate this poem aswell?

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If you have rated my other poem I put on about 30 minutes ago, this poem is for that same girl. I'm not going to give her both at the same time though. Anyways here it is.

Thistle

As the thistle grows,

So does a baby dove,

Being without you blows,

Just waiting for love,

As the thistle blooms,

So does your beauty,

No matter what looms,

You truly are a cutie,

As the thistle shines,

So do your eyes,

All kinds of times,

Please no good-byes.

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  1. on a 1 - 10 scale i give it a 4.8


  2. Its cute but your nearly calling her a thistle which i wouldnt like!

  3. In the world I live in a thistle is not something I would consider comparing someone to in a bit of love verse.  Prickly, sticky, irritating, no aromatic flowers, something that usually grows in pastures nourished by bull f***s, a plant to truly steer clear of.  

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