Could you rewrite a small part of my essay in a correct way?

Question

I agree with Sollisch, who says that going to a small restaurant is romantic, though I can not avoid going to a fast food place either. A little restaurant is a good place for people who are going out on a date to go; like Sollisch says, “Enjoy the atmosphere. Relax. If you’re lucky, your food will take a long time to prepare.” Sometimes it is good to go to such a restaurant so I can lighten up myself. Nevertheless, buying food at a fast food restaurant is cheaper than buying food at a small restaurant. When I do not have time to prepare my lunch, I go to a fast food place to have lunch; I also “enjoy” and “relax” in a fast food restaurant. I sometimes depend on buying my lunch at fast food restaurants. I prefer buying food at fast food restaurants because the prices are reasonable and I do not have to wait long compared to going to a little restaurant.

Answer 1

---  I agree with Sollisch, who says that going to a small restaurant is romantic, though I can not avoid going to a fast food place from time to time. A little restaurant is a good place for people who are going out on a date. Like Sollisch says, “Enjoy the atmosphere. Relax. If you’re lucky, your food will take a long time to prepare.” Sometimes it's good to go to a restaurant so I can loosen up. On the other hand, buying food at a fast food restaurant is cheaper than buying food at a small restaurant. And I don't have to wait long, unlike to going to a restaurant. Or when I don't have time to make lunch, fast food comes in handy. And, with all due respect to Sollisch, I can enjoy myself and relax in a fast food restaurant. ---

Then just add a finishing thought. Since your paragraph seems to be leaning towards the pro's of fast food restaurants, you might say.

--- In closing, a normal sit down restaurant is an enjoyable experience now and again. But nothing can better the convenience and affordable prices of fast food, which seems to be so important in day to day life.