Creative Wedding Invitation wording

Question

Future Bride here, at a cross roads with my invites. I fell in love with a creative poem opening for our invites:

"Whether yellow, orange, brown or gold

the colors of fall never grow old

This is the reflection of their love

Ever changing, yet everasting"

Problem? I close friend just so happened to choose the same opening on her invite...Imagine my surprise when I opened her invite? I need help I feel like I've run out of ideas... I want it to be special because I am making the invites myself and it's our wedding :)

I was thinking of using a verse from a song I wrote and am planning to serenade my future hubby with...

"It’s the way a beat needs a melody

To make any song complete

Your love is that kind of music to me

Love has never sounded so sweet"

is that tacky? Any help is appreciated!

Answer 1

I had a fall wedding and my invite said:

When autumn leaves

turn their brilliant hue

two lovers will join and say i do

Answer 2

CUUTTEE!!!!!!

:)

Answer 3

i like it!

I pledged my heart to you

It will forever be yours

My love is pure and true

Without you I would be lost

You have my heart

You have my soul

You have my life

For enterinty to hold

Answer 4

Not at all tacky, and it will be cool the way it ties in with the serenade for the hubby.  Plus you can tie the whole "making beautiful music together" theme through the wedding if you want to.