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Criticise This Poem, Please?

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http://falathiel.deviantart.com/art/The-Downward-Spiral-90076569

It's one of my personal favourites among all the stuff I have written, so... I just decided to ask you guys to criticise this one.

I'm 14 years old (and English is my 2nd language) so any improvement advice or information would be much appreciated.

Thanks in advance!

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  1. For 14 its great...


  2. no critising is needed.

  3. that was wow!

    good job!

    keep it up ok?
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