Critique My New Poem: Darling I am sorry?

Question

Sorry Darling

Sorry darling for the misunderstanding

Sorry for the pain

I never though to hurt you

Your happiness my goal

Things some times happen

Not under my control

Little explanation I can offer

But remorse and regret

So now darling forgive me

Let’s our love remains

Pure and unembellished

For ever and ever again

Answer 1

it works, however you could end with a last line that says again "sorry darling" or "darling, i'm sorry"

Answer 2

It's okay. Not deep/striking enough.

Answer 3

I think the basis of the poem is good, but I think poetry needs to be enigmatic, like a puzzle or a scene, that needs to be read into. Also, revise punctuation. I can't say it enough!

Answer 4

Kinda says it all doesn't it?