Critique My New Poem: When I am Gone?

Question

When I am gone away

No body will cry

No one will shed tears

My cold body

Will be for nature to reclaim

The sun will rise next day

As it did for million years

The clouds will fill the skies

The rain will fall and

Moisten my grave

Our lives are small waves

That hit the ocean shores

And soon disappear

So when I go away

No body

Should cry

No body

Should shed tears

Answer 1

Hey!! that was real good, i love poems like that, i dunno why. Anyways keep it up. Anyways, good luck with whatever ur doing :D

Answer 2

but you know Shakespear has written it all,    look at his sonnets,