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Critique My Poem: Are You Buying Me A Dress or a Diamond Ring?

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Love is a Game

Come Kiss me honey

Come and show me the money

Are you buying me a dress

Or diamond ring

I love you

And you love me

Come sit on the couch

Do not be shy

Touch me as you wish

Act like big boy

But gentleman

Remember there is

Some boundary

And some limits

So come have some romance

And tell me again

Are you buying me a dress

or a diamond ring?

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  1. Overall it's good.

    Rhyming honey / money is a bit cliche.

    Rock on though.

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