Critique My Poem ... Do You Really Love Me?

Question

I wonder you really love me

I wonder you care

In your eyes lay a mystery

My eyes can not see

In your heart there is a secret

I wish you reveal

When you giggle

I am swept by wonderment

In oceans so deep

Please tell me

So simple and sweet

Do you really love me?

Do you really care?

Answer 1

short -- sweet -- to the point

keep up your writing, only be practice will you refine it to the best that it can be and you are well on your way. Feel what you write and make it come alive.

Answer 2

yes i love you.  of course i love you.  why would i be doing this but for love.  like a dove.  a peaceful symbol is my heart.  and with you in it.  we'll never be apart.  thanks.  thanks.  for the moment's we've shared.  thanks some more for the moment you're scared.  me being the one to come make you feel warm.  i'll suffer all the punishment.  all the scorn.  and be reborn.  but once with you.  this life is ending.  and we are true

Answer 3

This is so good. You have been studying. I can tell. I love you, I do.

Answer 4

It is nicely put together, but I do not exactly feel the true emotion behind it..Almost "too pretty" where it sounds a bit clique.