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Critique My Poem: Love is a Game?

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Love is a Game

There is no shame

No one to blame

Play the game smart

Learn this inquisitive art

Play it safely

You some times a winner

And some times a loser

It is fun game to play

You may win your love trophy

Sometimes you left wonder

With broken heart

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  1. I like your idea but reading it seemed choppy.  Read out loud and I think you will also hear.  Try this for opening:

    Love is a game

    there is no shame

    no one to blame

    Play smart the game

    learn its art

    play it well

    Keep at it.

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