Critique My Poem: The Girl From Bronx

Question

Sweet and lovely

The girl from Bronx

Wih Dominican Caramel tan

Walking down the street

with brim black hat

Silky long hair

how lovely

Wearing short skirt

tight and s**y

Showing shapely legs

how beautiful and s**y

Has pink high heels

making her tip top s**y

Drawing jeers and whistles

Oh the girl from the Bronx

Sweet and lovely

Answer 1

You are going to be famous one day soon. I feel it in my dominican bones.lol

Answer 2

I see her walking down the street and she is s**y, hearing the whistles and jeers, ---yes the picture has been painted with your words and well done at that!!Cheers!!