Critique My Poem: The world of love?

Question

The World of Love

Can be bitter or can be sweet

It is world of conquer and retreat

It can taste honey

It can taste salt and pepper

So before you enter this world

You need to have precautions

Wear your shiny armor

And move forward

Or carry a bouquet of flowers

Winning hearts and seducing a lovers

Answer 1

yes you are right

Answer 2

it's ok ...i mean could be funnier!  (-; soz i just like funny poetry!

Answer 3

It's a good poem, but personally i feel if it's going to rhyme in the beginning, then why can't the rest rhyme? Or maybe just no rhyming at all? I am a published poet. I like where your head is at though. I give it 8/10. Just needs to flow a little better.

Answer 4

sounds awesome, keep up the good work

www.allpoetry.com if you want some help improving,