Critique My Poem: Viola Hungry For Love?

Question

Viola is hungry for love

For sensuous pleasure

When her body shivers

With Joy and ecstasy

When lover have her treasure

Viola is master piece

Of quiet beast

She can devour her lover

Drain him from last drop of power

Viola you have to watch

With Her green eyes

With her ivory figure

Viola is a temple

For worship

To ascend heaven

Answer 1

its pretty good.