Critique my newest poem, "Ode to my Dog"?

Question

You are my dog and I love you very much.

I love your waggy tail and the way you salivate.

You bit me once but I didn't retaliate.

You fetch all my sticks and give me wet kisses

You are the male made me forget all the b*****s.

Your coat is so shiny from your protein-rich diet!

(That dog food's expensive, but for you I'll buy it.)

In summary, Grover, you are my friend,

My companion, my true love until the end.

THe eNd

Answer 1

i don't have a pet, yet i admire pet lovers like you spending time to write a poem for pet. if only your pet can read and understand it, he will retaliate with ba wow wow wow wow wow . . . . . .

but you're right, pets are great companions!

Answer 2

cool take a look at mine please:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 3

that poem was q***r.

Answer 4

Meh.