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Critique on poem?

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Alone in a crowded room

Surrounded by vivid characters

Words whispered bounce off my ear drums

Inhaling every syllable

Lies I hear

Oceans rush down my cheeks

Just to be caught by imaginary friends

Who comfort me

Only when the lies

Are said by those I considered my friends

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  1. If you are a teenager then I suggest this website

    http://www.teenink.com/


  2. Its good. Nice metaphors, too. Defiantly relateable.

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