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Critque My New Poem: Elephant Elephant ?

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Elephant Elephant

All the time

You are eating some food

All the world love you

You little cute

You have some trunk

That can smash trees

Very impressive

You delightful creature

You mean business

When you go to circus

You are fun and entertaining

Your earn your wages

With sacks of peanuts

In India you are adored

They worship in temples

And call you Ganeesh

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  1. sorry but it is lacking in grammar  


  2. Beautiful Poem.
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