Critque My Poem: I Fall in Love Easily

Question

I fall in world of love easily

There is no explanation or excuses

I get bruised and bandaged

Time and time again

I went to see a doctor

For one vaccine or two

I fell in love with the receptionist

I turned around,left and

Went Back home

Answer 1

very nice,

it's unique and i love it!!

keep it up!!

Answer 2

Hehe its quite nice and funny too

Answer 3

I like it.  It has a good story behind it... however, I would work on the rhythm a little bit.  Other than that, nice. =)

Answer 4

Snap out of it(slapping you to bring you to your senses). You better get with the times and all this falling in love will get expensive for you.lol.

I think it is nice but dam the receptionist too.

Wow. I want some of what you are having.

Answer 5

Lol i like it alot that was really good and funny too.

Answer 6

LOL very comical, this is a true baffle, love the twist !! Cheers!!

Answer 7

Better than most

Needs seperate verses and more formality for the rhyming, and a better punch line.