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Critque My Poem The world of love is sweet?

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When your eyes and my eyes meet

When your hands and my hands touch

When you and I get closer

When our spirits intertwine

When we feel joy and splendor

Torrent happiness and pleasure

Our hopes and dreams

that these moments

engrave in time

and for me and you last for ever

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  1. A lot of mirroring, really relates to people. Comprehensible. Simple and direct. Good job!


  2. Yeah. alot of mirroring. It is beautiful.lol.

    I think we have quite the poet here. This is hot. I do not know what mirroring is. Proud of you.
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