Critque my poem please. be honest!?

Question

Is it possible for you to know,

Can anyone ever understand?

Should I go with the flow,

Or do something totally unplanned?

I'm stuck in a haze,

Where nothing seems to shine.

Is it just a phase?

Or is this forever mine?

<3

~an average girl

Answer 1

that was good an average actuall cupid

Answer 2

Wow good poem!

Answer 3

It sparks an interest. And it makes you feel as if it could be written for the reader as well. Like you can relate to its meaning. My guess is you are more then just an average girl. Keep writing.

Answer 4

That was cute. You are adorable. Keep writing.

Answer 5

This is nice the reader can connect to the meaning of this poem actually. It&#039;s flow is great keep writing more there&#039;s an interest of letting the reader know more.