Ok so mi'm going into 7th grade and i want to know what you think of my poem. I love everything about poetry, and I enjoy writing it, but I'm a bit curious to see what you all think. It doesnt have a title, and it would be great if you could help me get a title too.
Here it is:
For once in my life my independent self needs someone to rely on. Someone to be there when i need it and when i don't. and you've made me feel lost in my own mind. but i do see hope in wishing someone will be there when i return again. part of me enjoys knowing what that feeling felt like, and the other part wishes i had never experienced it so i wouldn't know what i was missing. but dont fret, i will soon be to normal and the world will keep turning and our lives will continue on.
this is my other one:
I quietly lay in the forest awaiting your arrival
Under the tree I lay, patient yet anxious
Quietly I lay depending on you to come for my survival
As I lay there under the big Oak tree I can't help but think about you
and I ponder if you ever think about me
Longer and longer I lay there
Thinking you've forgotten
And I look around to see all the plants and animals glare
More and more I think that you've failed to remember
So I lay there for eternity
That being my surrender.
So the next time I have to survive on you,
I certainly know not to- Tayy
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