DOES THIS DEDICATION MAKE SENCE? its very short plz check it out?

Question

to the six musketeers: Beth, Selam, Eliza, Marta and Lewam, which I could have never gotten through this anthology without you all.

or if you have a better way of saying that please do tell!

Answer 1

"which"  is incorrect. Just leave it out and put a period after Lewam.

Answer 2

put a period after lewam. then say. i never could have got through this anthology without all of you.

Answer 3

Beth, Selam, Eliza, Marta and Lewam are only FIVE and thus can hardly  be SIX musketeers. If you include yourself, that should be stated otherwise make it FIVE.

A semicolon after Lewam and deleting "which" would suffice.

Answer 4

sounds ok!

Answer 5

yea... It makes sense.  :)

Answer 6

To the Six musketeers: Beth, Selam, Eliza, Marta and Lewam, without whom I could have never finished this anthology.

or:

To the Six musketeers: Beth, Selam, Eliza, Marta and Lewam, I could have never gotten through this anthology without you all.

Answer 7

YUP THATS A GOOD ONE:D