{[DOH]} }{ANER's initiation into the poetic world of Yahoo answers ?

Question

Whether it be blood or guts,

or fights of glory,

every man has his own story!

The breaking mind

makes a hellish tale,

on which the boat of legend sail.

Preparation of a loyal heart,

can a soldier be created.

Domination of a servants love,

will freedom so be weighted.

-HAHNER

Answer 1

This poem has a wonderfully staccato rhythm, and fairly gallops from beginning to end...perhaps to honor country??  This is a lovely, compact poem that reminds the reader of the price of freedom, a freedom we have come to take for granted.  A fine initiation HAHNER.