Dark deck fix?

Question

dont say 3 dad's cos ive not got 3 thnx for any help ill also be adding 2 allure of darknesses in so it would help if you tell me what to take out so ill know when i get them

monsters 21

arma knights 3

cyber valley 2

DAD 1

promtheous king of the shadows 1

darklord zerato1

lich lord king ov the underworld 1

phantom of chaos 1

mystic tomato 1

rainbow dark drag 1

marshmallon 1

spirit reaper 1

dark grepher 1

necro gardna 1

shadow preistress of ohm 1

dark knight parashath 1

snipe hunter 1

dark horus 1

d hero dasher 1

spells 14

fires of doombsday 2

dark eruption 1

heavy storm 1

foolish burrial 1

swords 1

prem 1

monster reborn 1

magiic mallet 1

mst 1

shrink1

lightning vortex 1

traps7

saka 2

metal reflect slime 1

dark illusion 1

magic cylender 1

raidiant mirror force 1

dark bribe 1

total 42

Answer 1

first thing first you should try to have 40 cards not more.

you can add yubel,Yubel - Terror Incarnate and Yubel - The Ultimate Nightmare. They are great cards. Your deck don't have any really good strategy

you can test to take out:

-Promtheous king of the shadows.  It's not good, you remov your cards and don't get a good monster for more then a turn.

-Dark eruption. You do play with rainbow dark dragon. It need cards in your grave.

-magic cylender or saka you need space.

-shrink. it's not that good.

-magiic mallet you need good cards only and this card is not

good.

-dark horus. It's kind of good if you get it out on the feld, but you can only get it out if you got 2 monsters and that is not that easy.

- lich lord king ov the underworld. This card is just bad. You most tribut a dark monster, well that's not to hard. 2400 atk not to good. the efekt hm when it dies you get it to the hand...

and need to tribute more cards and you can't remove it for rainbow dark dragon

-d hero dasher. it's not good in a dark deck

-armagedom knigtx2. Dark grepher is so much better.

you can still need one to have difrent name on your monsters for rainbow dark dragon

+Dark grepher x2 it's like armagedon knight but better

+necro gardnax2 it can be realy use full some times i play with it.

+Dark Nephthys. it's kind of good

+Escape from the Dark Dimensionx2

+Return from the Different Dimension

hop my tips were use full. Live good and play with yubel!

Answer 2

that deck kinda sucks i rated it 4/10