Dear Razorblade, (prose letter)?

Question

Dear Razorblade,

Years of crimson-laced ecstasy emanates from your sharpened cold steel. Numbness has never hurt so much nor emptiness been so abundant with hate. Ignorant bliss is out of reach and I am too far-gone to be saved. The point of no return can be seen in the not too distant future, beneath the blinding light of the horizon. Once I reach the end of my fate, I will throw myself at your mercy and slowly watch the sun set on this broken life, which will cease upon my untimely demise. As the sun embarks on its nightly endeavour towards ephemeral death, I will surrender my body, my being, my life and my all to the clouds, which purge the earth of the suns nourishment. This night, I lay beneath the stars, shining beacons of radiance, which illuminate the darkness of the lifeless night sky. In desperation I will grasp at my remaining strands of sanity, only to be weakened by fate’s sharp touch, severing my residual attachment to the earth. Death’s shadow is cast on me as I stand

Answer 1

You taunt me with your taste for the touch. Don't mock me! I have  been long before and will be long after. You are here for reasons unknown to me and I care not. This release you seek is not to be found in the thin edge you walk on. Have you read my bio. Checked my credits. I claim as I choose not at your hand. When ready the flow will drown you with glorious light of white. The only crimson for you is in dawns light and dusks glow. Now go set this thinly veiled notion to rest and be done with your cutting innuendo. Don't taunt me. I am not ready for you.

Answer 2

"Hi!"

That is absolutely excellent!"

Great work.

WELL DONE! : )

Answer 3

I LOVE IT! I especially liked the last lines :)

Answer 4

Hiya !

Excellent piece of prose !  Well written - good structure - be proud !

Answer 5

yes?