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Question

【part2】The other days were all right. I visited the Huangpu River another day, and I like smelling the water. I also saw the Oriental Pearl Tower, and Shanghai’s tallest building--the Shanghai Global Financial Hub, I went to Fudan University, a place once should have been mine. I went to Qibao, but missed the old town... Although the journey was driftless, but it still made me happy. A never be owned freedom.

Finally, I left Shanghai, an area not belonged to me, but already seemed mine, a strange but familiar area. Shanghai! I will miss you! Forever! I’ll be back!

Answer 1

my comments and punctuation corrections are in [ ].

The other days were [alright]. [One day,] I visited the Huangpu River and I [liked the smell of the water]. I also saw the Oriental Pearl Tower, and Shanghai’s tallest building[: ]the Shanghai Global Financial Hub. [Another day,] I went to Fudan University, a place [I had hoped to attend as a student.] I also went to Qibao, [but missed the old town - what do you mean here?]. Although the journey was [driftless-what do you mean here?] , it still made me happy. [A never be owned freedom-what do you mean here?].

Finally, I left Shanghai, an [strange] area [at first] but [quickly] [becoming] familiar. Shanghai, I will miss you; but I’ll be back!

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