Did I put the dots in all the right places in this Trigee?

Question

I walk into the shadows..........the shadows of fear

head held high.......................I enter, shoulders drawn back

looking upward......................a light parts the greyness

I see an outstretched hand.....beckoning me to follow

A voice I heard......................"your strength I saw

"grab hold upon your faith.......I'll not let you walk alone."

Shadows fell..........................fear subsided

Safe exit I did make...............assisted by tested faith.

Answer 1

Even your woops are lovely.

Answer 2

I would expect this from you, Ma.

Exceptional words.

Remember, they're just dots...

Answer 3

I'm not comcerned with the dots.....

This is absolutely beautiful and I love it!!

Answer 4

I couldn't tell you Ma......I don't know the difference when it comes to poetry. But I know what I like.

And this one I do like.

Answer 5

Yes, the dots go where you say they go. I'm the Tinsmith...I mean Tunesmith...

Answer 6

This is quite beautiful, a Trigee about faith tested and the triumph of that faith.  The dots are indeed in all the right places....this is one of the best I have seen.  It's a very encouraging and transcendent piece, and i love it.  Thank you.  

Answer 7

You got me ma, but I liked it irregardless. LMAO

Answer 8

Yeah Ma,,,,,All Those Dots Are Helping To Assist,,, "The Tested Faith",,,,I Like This Very Much Ma

Well Done

Answer 9

You 'connected' the dots well.  Interesting statement...tested faith.  Like wearing your well worn blue jeans?

Answer 10

Love your .........ma!

Answer 11

A lovely trigee.

Answer 12

This was just wonderful ma--good job! A nice smooth read and uplifting as well!

My favorite line---------

Safe exit I did make...............assisted by tested faith

Very nice indeed!!

   ( Got me a Trigee on the drawing board myself)

Cheers!!

Answer 13

In all the right places, in all the right ways, saying all the right things. I find myself moved. Thank you, ma.