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Did you ever play hid-n-seek with the sun on a cloudy day when you were a child?

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Mr Sun

Outside today

We go to play

The sun is out

There is no doubt

Shining bright

It give out light.

Sunglasses on

Sunlight shown,

Clouds passing by

Is the sun in the sky?

Is it playing hid-n-seek?

Or coming out to peak?

Mr. Sun where are you.

I can see the sky so blue.

What's that peaking out

Now I see the sun all about!

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  1. Yes


  2. Very sweet offering, my grandaughter would love this!

    I especially like that it would not talk down to a child.

    Spelling correction: peek, peeking rather than peak,which is a mountain.

  3. a nice simple poem.

    it also makes for great imagery - sketches for little children ...

    love to see the sun play hide-n-seek especially with the wooly white clouds ....

  4. Shadow box,animals,I've even seen pictures in the sky still do...Very nice poetry...Blessings .Blessings Yahoo

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