Do Like This poem? My 12 year old sister wrote it.?

Question

Best Friend

By. Melissa Jean Campbell

You never left my side .You never left me at any time

If I needed a joke , you were the jester.

When I was blue in sadness you were the sun.

But, as we get older we’ll grow apart but always we will hold a special place in each others hearts.

If I have ever loved anyone its you . you will always be better than a brother.

You are my best friend.

Answer 1

sweet loving soul,  I like it x

Answer 2

that's so beautiful!

Answer 3

Yeah, It's good.

Answer 4

she looses me at the "better than a brother". was this poem directed to a sibling?

it's really sweet. it obviously shows a lot of raw emotion, and truth with the foreshadowing of "as we get older we'll grow apart". but i really like it

Answer 5

Aww, that is such a cute poem!

10/10!

I loved it!

I can see a future poet in the making!

X

Answer 6

I like it a lot!

Answer 7

That's very sweet.  I like it.

Answer 8

aww that's so cute :D