Do i have talent...? pls read my poem???

Question

The soul

a solid being of ways unsettled

Hurts unknown, stories untold

Secrets buried

A deep pleasure

Of deceit

Enmity

Souls a river deeper than the ocean’s depth

A laughing ground

Of presence felt

A precious secret of you and me

A profound place I’ve come to call home

Soul

A great place to call home

Soul, an attachment to feeling

An understanding so rare

A prevailing of a concurrent spirit

A perfect embellish of our core

Hidden emotions

Soul, what wisdom you carry

What treasure you are

Answer 1

every one has talent =]

Answer 2

too little rhyme, I afraid, but

very original and nice !

Answer 3

Talent...yes! I enjoyed your poem. Great style. I hope to read more of your work.

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Answer 4

yes very good , keep it up ok .

Answer 5

a pen and the mind

breathes a soul not everyone

can feel...

you're amongst

the blessed who can ride the quill....

Answer 6

I think it's kinda kwl, but honestly i have no clue if it really is I have no eperience in that.

Answer 7

Very lovely. You should post it on www.poetry.com

Professionals can rate it and you can get feedback and ideas from other poets.  

Answer 8

Yes it is a very good poem, you definelty have a great talent. Carry it on, and don't listen to people that put you down for it, it's a great talent, so keep working on those poems!!

-xox

Answer 9

It sounds dark. Everyone has talent. Even though it sounds dark, I still like it. Keep up the good work. Poetry is a nice way to express yourself.

Answer 10

You have a great style, and if you keep working at it, it will get better. Just by reading your poem, it's easy to see that you have potential. If writing it what you love to do, I say go for it, you definitely have the talent.

It's very captivating, I enjoyed the metaphors. Keep writing if that's what you love. Good luck.