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Do the changing seasons sound like a one hand clapping?

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And I felt the seasons change and applauded them all.

Gently draw closer the changes to Summers reign,

her perpetual green garment gives way to Autumns.

Suffusion of reds and browns that leave a stain

on the forests crown as seen by a thousand suns.

Summers renunciation of her sceptre and crown

is but a series of the seasons played in four parts.

Each part choreographed by dramatists of renown;

and presented to all who appreciate the finer arts.

To applaud in standing acclamation, as each scene

is played out to its conclusion. Yet in its unification

the audience is naive of its end having ever been;

as season blends with season in perfect integration

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  1. Aussie Aussie Aussie, Rob, Rob, Robert!

    Gold medal effort RH! Just Superb!


  2. A canvas worthy of The Louvre. (Or, at least your state capitals museum--I've never been outside of The States.)

  3. This is an Opera is four acts--"seasons played in four parts."

    I read in awe this masterpiece.

  4. A great write, eloquent and timely.  I took the liberty of highlighting possible edits to consider, albeit minor ( ).  

    Gently draw closer (the) changes to Summers reign,

    her perpetual green garment gives way to Autumn’s

    suffusion of reds and browns that leave a stain

    on (the) forests crown as seen by a thousand suns.

    Summers renunciation of her sceptre and crown(,)

    (is) but a series of the seasons played in (four) parts.

    Each part choreographed by dramatists of renown;

    (and) presented to all who appreciate (the) finer arts.

    (To) applaud in standing acclamation, as each scene

    is played (out) to its conclusion. Yet in (its) unification(,)

    (the) audience is naive of its end having ever been;

    as season blends with season in perfect integration

    Again, well done.

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