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when 2morro started without me

when 2morro started without me and i am not their to see if the sun should rise and find your eyes are filled with tears for me please dont cry the way you did to day while thinking of the many things we didnt get to say i know you loved me as much as i loved you and please try to understand that angels came called my name and took me by the hand dont think were far apart for every time you think of me i m right their in your heart

Answer 1

I thought it was cute (:

Answer 2

Not too bad.

Answer 3

WHEN TOMORROW STARTED WITHOUT ME

Cristina

I want to know what you think about

when tomorrow started without me,

and am not there, the sun to rise

your eyes are filled with tears for me.

please don’t cry, the way you did

while thinking things we failed to say.

I know you loved me,

as much I did

love you and please try

understand that angels came

and called my name

took me by the hand

don’t think we’re far,

so far apart

for every time you think of me

i am right there in your heart.

(dezfer sic narf)

Answer 4

No comment other than your spelling error on the word 'there' you spelled it as 'their' which shows possession rather than the proper spelling 'there' which indicates location.

Example: it was 'their' choice to be together.

                 I think I saw you put your keys over 'there'

Answer 5

i love it! It kinda sounds like  suicidenote though

Answer 6

no

Answer 7

i love the words. but line it up like a poem puh leezzz

WHEN TOMORROW STARTED WITHOUT ME (nice title)

when tomorrow started without me,

and i am not there to see if the sun

should rise and find your eyes are filled

with tears, for me.

please dont cry, the wawy you did

today while thinking of the many things

we didnt get to say.

I know you loved me,

as much as i loved you

and please try to understand

that the angels called my name

and took me by the hand

dont think we were far apart

for every time you think of me.

i am right there in your heart.

<3 hehe <3

nicely done.

Answer 8

I like it!

Answer 9

I want to know what u think about it

when 2morro started without me

When 2morro started without me

and i am not their to see

If the sun should rise and find your eyes

are filled with tears

For me please dont cry the way you did

today while thinking

Of the many things we didnt get to say

I know you loved me as much as i loved

you and please try to understand that angels came

Called my name and took me by the hand dont think

were far apart for every time you think of me

I'm right their in your heart

Answer 10

I like it.

But. You need to work on spelling for example 'i am not their to see if' should be 'I am not there to see if' and today is one word not two. their and there are two different things, you made tht mistake several times, you need to fix that.

Also for each new line press enter so it is set out like a poem which makes it easier to read.

Answer 11

two thumbs up