im a huge fan of poe,so i decided 2 write my own version of Annabel Lee (1 of my favs).tell me if it is good and did i do the poem justice.
A angels's sin
Created by the man above,
to give love and not be loved.
To watch the pure,
and make things sure.
I his blessing and he my curse,
we only wanted each other most.
We formed a love to be put on high,
that God himself couldnt untie.
From the envy of the angels above,
that couldnt touch our love.
seprated me and he,
stealing every memory from me.
Now theres nothing more to see,
but heaven and me.
This is my story,of a
ANGEL'S SIN
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