Do u like the poem?

Question

i say 4 prayers everynight before i go to sleep. one of them is a poem. i want to see if you like this famous quote.

how i lay me down to sleep

i pray the lord my soul to keep

let love flow with me all the night

and wake me in the morning light

Answer 1

now I lay me down to sleep

I've got my p*pe, I've got my w****

I'll smoke up by my tv's light

I hope X-Files is on tonight

now I lay me down to rest

I've smoked so hard I'm out of breath

it's late at night, i'm bleary eyed

I hope it's not reruns all night

now I lay me down to doze

I keep my b*ng and doritos close

one more t*ke and I'll be alright

I hope I get some sleep tonight

now I lay me down to crash

all my w**d is gone at last

but here floods in the morning light -

Ah, c**p, I didn't get no sleep last night!

I wasn't trying to upstage you or anything. You just inspired me. =)

And no, I don't do that stuff. Well, anymore. I mean, not for like years and years. Seriously. But it's reeeaaaly late at night and my brain is acting funny.

I hope this is half as amusing in the morning as it is right now. =)

Luas

Answer 2

Its ok, its a bit cheesy--It simple and too the point and has a nice flow--but its average