Do u like this poem...answer please!!!!!?

Question

A LIFE WITHOUT ME

A life without me

There would be no sorrow

No tears, no regret

I am a nobody

And no one cares

Always forgotten

Never remembered

A life without me

Is just another tomorrow

Answer 1

its like a song you know

ps:nice

Answer 2

Yes, it's very nice.  

Answer 3

YES I LIKE IT, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

Answer 4

It's a little sad but I like it.

Answer 5

I love it! It really describes how you felt and I can see the emotions that are running through your head. very nice, well done.

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Answer 6

Listen, If you aint got respect, it dont matter wether you like the poem or not, because when you get back to wherever you came from noone will respect you.

P.s.-I like it

Answer 7

Shore

Answer 8

It's a sad poem. But it's very nice.

Answer 9

I get the vibe that this poem is about killing yourself, or being gone. It's very simple, I like it, but the rythm seems to be a little off. No tears, no regreat goes straight into I am nobody and that sounds a little odd. I think ending it with I am nobody would be a very bold statement. And it would stick in peoples brains. And then you could go from no tears no regret and into no one cares, and that would flow with the no's. Then you could after that say Who am I? And answer with always forgotton, never remembered (maybe use a couple synonyms for never and always, like seldom or something)

A life without me,

there would be no sorrow,

No tears, no regret,

No one cares.

Who am I? Always forgotten.

Seldon remembered.

A life without me

Is just another tomorrow.

Who am I?

I am nobody.

So i hope this helps, but this is a GREAT poem. I always pick my work apart, far worse then this, I find it hard to find something wrong with it. Great poem!!!

Answer 10

i really like this poem

kudos xD