Do u like this poem its written by me??

Question

When I think I could reach so high

the first thing I do think is to touch the sky

Everybody think its the imagination of mine

but I think its my bravery's sign

How it is??

Answer 1

I think it is a great start to a poem. It does not need to be long and drawn to be a good poem, only, it needs detail and clarity and it needs to say something to the reader. You did good on all accounts! What it needs now is cleaning up! When I write a poem, normally in ten to fifteen minutes, I put it aside for a week or so, and then I re-read it and find where it needs tweaking. I like to think my poems and writings are perfect the from the get-go but, every time I read it again I see how I can make it better, mostly through spelling and grammar! You did great! It says all that you wanted to portray. Send me another one. Ciao!

Answer 2

I like it, add some more too it

Answer 3

I like it did you make it yourself?

Answer 4

it's okay but there are three things:

1. where is says "the first thing i do think is to touch the sky", i think you should have it "the first thing i think is to touch the sky" i think the 'do' in there messes up the flow.

2. you need a middle, it's way too incomplete.

3. the last line just doesn't sound right, i think you should take out the 'my' or if you wanna keep that in there then change 'it's' to 'it is'. idk it's just something with the flow.

and remember poems don't always have to rhyme.

hope that helps! : )

Answer 5

it is great!  is it about becoming a woman?

Answer 6

OK

you've got the start

you've got the finish

now all you need is the bit in the middle