Do u like this poem or not

Question

Gora Ndiaye

Go near the river and look for my man

On the rocks near the swans there he stand

Run near the ocean by the sand

And look for him there he stands

Near the lake by the rocks

Dancing in his silly socks

I Trust him hand by hand

And you should to because hes my man

Youll learn how to swin with his hands

Everywhere the oceans meets there he stands

Answer 1

it has potential...

but u dont need to rhyme, its holding you back.

answer mine:

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Answer 2

Actually, not at all.

I don't really have anything nice to say about it.

It starts out serious, and then you switch to this silly socks, bull.

It doesn't make any sense.

And the meter is way far off.

Personally, I think it sucks.

Ask a blunt question. Get a blunt answer.

Answer 3

Skool,

This is interesting

because this poem is talking about

the ocean or the river

Along both of these bodies of water

are rocks.  

Beside each of these are also the sand.

Learning to swim

In the lakes yes but the river no

for the current can be strong and

sweep one under.    

Answer 4

No. It's a bit nonsensical.

Answer 5

Not really