Do u like this poem?

Question

I Cry

Sometime when I'm alone,

I Cry,

Cause I am on my own.

The tears I cry are bitter and warm.

They flow with life but takes no form

I cry because my heart is torn.

I find it difficult to carry on.

If I had an ear of confiding,

I would cry among my treasured friend,

but who do you know that stops that long,

to help another carry on.

The world moves fast and it would rather pass by.

Then to stop and see what makes one cry,

so painful and sad.

And sometimes...

I Cry

and no one cares why.

For those who dont know who this poem is from

http://s306.photobucket.com/albums/nn270/KRYSTLEBABE_2008/?action=view&current=2-pac.jpg

when i read this poem it was like reading how i feel

Answer 1

it is good

Answer 2

yes it very emotional and very strong word i feel the same way too when the feeling grow inside of you it very hard to carry on with your life.

Answer 3

nice poem! I like it

Answer 4

Ya

Answer 5

i like tupacs gangster shizz

Answer 6

very deep..

i like it

Answer 7

As a poem, no. It's a mixture of different types of poetry, so as a poem it does not work that well. As a song or something maybe...

Answer 8

interesting i love it!

Answer 9

i too love this poem because i feel like it describes how i feel and how i see some things in my life  

Answer 10

i can relate...

Answer 11

That sounds very unique. I like it.                   ;)

Answer 12

No.

I like 2pac, but this is bad...

Answer 13

It's all right, but the rhyme scheme doesn't flow very well in my opinion and I don't like that "carry on" is repeated. Sometimes repetition works, but I don't care or it here.  

Answer 14

yah like it

Answer 15

r u the Real Slim Shady?..lol JK :)