Do u like ze nu haiku?

Question

my friend visits me

and the moon in my window

is his calling card

Pedants note: lower case, no punctuation, has multiple meanings, moon will do for "seasonal reference" ( a la Harvest Moon). So what say the crits?

Answer 1

Daffodil smiles

On the children in the park

Needing their mothers

(No pretense)

Lazy, hazy moon

Smiles on the propane grills

In a timid way

Answer 2

Just thoughts of birds, bees

and variations thereof

work for sigmund freud

Answer 3

Myles makes me smiles

and he pleasures

all my wilds  

hey i try give me that I don't know what the h**l your talking about ...

Answer 4

Quite nice!

Answer 5

nice i love haikus

good job!

Answer 6

well done.