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Do u like ze nu haiku?

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my friend visits me

and the moon in my window

is his calling card

Pedants note: lower case, no punctuation, has multiple meanings, moon will do for "seasonal reference" ( a la Harvest Moon). So what say the crits?

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  1. Daffodil smiles

    On the children in the park

    Needing their mothers

    (No pretense)

    Lazy, hazy moon

    Smiles on the propane grills

    In a timid way


  2. Just thoughts of birds, bees

    and variations thereof

    work for sigmund freud

  3. Myles makes me smiles

    and he pleasures

    all my wilds  

    hey i try give me that I don't know what the h**l your talking about ...

  4. Quite nice!

  5. nice i love haikus

    good job!

  6. well done.
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