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Do u think this poem is good enough to be published

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I was so smart they said I should of been a scientist

I have crazy visions in my mind thats why I need a psychiatrist

I look in the dictionary to find a random word

Then I turn nouns and adjectives into verbs

Im a Jesus so Im holden Gods rifle

I know stuff that you wasnt ment to find like the Lost Books out of the Bible

Im fighten war everyday so Im a Jesus in the battle

I know what you thinkin he must be a Christian

That just shows how much you listen and pay attention

Because a real man of God dosent need a religion

All he need is God and his family not those old traditions

You must be ignorate to think the end is near

Cause our father God would never scare you and have you in fear

You want to see God and Jesus its simple look in the mirror

We are all Gods and powerful beyond measure

Since I found this message I feel like a pirate finding lost treasure

Im saying the truth thats why its so insane

This might be insane but God and the Devil really are the same

We do good and bad thats how we are the Devil and God

Your getting closer to the answer just turn the door nob

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  1. Making the poem "shorter cuter and more simple" like the other person said will not "fix" a poem. I know because mine was long and spoke of Greek mythology when it was published.


  2. no.  however you could create a chap book of your poetry and try to market it yourself.

  3. uh i didnt read it sorry....make it shorter cuter and more simple

  4. sorry but no you can keep trying

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