Do you LIke This Pome Tell Me Why?

Question

On the edge of the earth, been there sense birth

Just trying to fall off, A soft and gentle push is all I need

Falling isn't bad it's to be free

BY CARL WALKER

Answer 1

Sort of confusing the readers. I, personally, don't like it. Maybe it has a deeper meaning but I can't figure it out and that's why I don't like it.

Answer 2

I really really really like this. It's short but has meaning.

Btw you are a terrible speller LOL,

do you like this "pome?" wow. its POEM.

and the first line, should it be "been there SINCE birth?"

and why do you capitalize "A" in the second line?

Answer 3

I think this is a beautifully short but sweet way to say you want to die.

I love it.

Answer 4

I guess its ok if you think it is ,but I guess I like it