Do you enjoy my poem?Have any title ideas?

Question

Abstract to my eye,

gaze into the sky,

as the clouds go by.

A figure without form,

so shapless, so deformed,

beware the coming storm.

Pure white against sky blue,

the sweet heavenly hue,

lying on a field, cloud-gazing with you.

Answer 1

nebulous or amorphous (possible titles)

Answer 2

awesome

Answer 3

I like it! How about "perfect moment" for a title

Answer 4

I like this poem, you sure know poetry.

Answer 5

i luv it i write poems 2 u kno anyways i think it should be called the mysterious form just a suggestion

Answer 6

Very "Beat Poetry" like.... well done.

Answer 7

Very very nice!

I love poetry and your poem was lovely.

Perhaps

cloud-gazing

or

spring time blues

Endless sky

i don't know

good luck though!

Answer 8

the poem title should be the cloud

Answer 9

Passing Me By

Answer 10

It does not flow.

You talk about a coming storm,

then about pure white against sky blue.

You are skillful with your words, but you need to make more sense, and have better flow.

You could call this one,

Shapless Storm Gazer, or something

Answer 11

Abstract Sky

Gazing Wonders

Heavenly Hue

Just take words out of your poem and they should make a great title!

Answer 12

Thats incredable!!!! I would name it feeling withen

Answer 13

I really like your poem!!

its very touching.........

but irdk what you could

write as the title....hmmm

Answer 14

I would call it "Mounds of White"

I like the poem though, simple, but very well written.

Answer 15

i dont like it

Answer 16

Yes i like your poem, but not all poems Have to ryhme.

For a title i suggest evil in disgise

I get this from your secong verse a figure with out form beware the coming storm  says it can seem harmless but can also bring out lots of power, like people

sorry if you hate it i am only 11

Answer 17

What about "Ethereal Soul"?

Answer 18

I'd call it Clouds in the sky

It is good

WELL DONE!

Answer 19

Yes is a lovley poem.

It deserves a name like,,,,  when im with you

Answer 20

well how about unknow feeling inside?

Answer 21

"Storms of life...Moments go by","Days with you", or "sky"......I think one of those would fit (my favorite is the fisrt one).Please choose me as best answer =D

Answer 22

"The Sky."

Answer 23

wonderful you have a way with words it is so unique (in a good way) that i dont know any title names for it