Do you experience vertigo?

Question

"Resolve of Waking Hearts" - acrostic quadrifid

Deeper I fall into the vortex of haunted eyes,

Illumination now seems a dim vision.

Zephyr winds in my heart whisper, "Fall."

Zealously, I guard you, and finally realize.

You were always prey to Cupid's precision--

Insane, spinning, under your thrall.

Now I find time unable to stall,

Grieving the days I foolishly spent

Longing for the transience of love; fool's golden gleam.

One last time, hear my desperate call,

Vicious passion, the truth, my soul intent.

Eventually, I will make you more than a dream.

Answer 1

This poem is dizzyingly lovely, I wish I had your skill in attempting and mastering so many forms!

"You were always prey to Cupid's precision" <----- LOVE that line!

Answer 2

Excellent acrostic, beautifully spun words, longing for love to stay.

Answer 3

"Hi!",

"What a fantastic Acrostic".

You really are a fabulous poet.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

Answer 4

I don't know if I experience vertigo or not, I mean I get dizzy quite often but it's more like a slow-motion-hard-to-focus-on-things kind of a dizziness and then I black out and have a seizure (usually petit-mal).

I loved the rhyme scheme in this ABC, ABC, CDE, CDE that really tide the first two stanzas to the last two. Is that already a style (I mean with a name and all), because if it isn't maybe we could call it Terza Evadne. An acrostic in Terza Evadne--sounds cool uh?

Answer 5

Enchanting and romantic, as a total, yet I favor the first three lines.

Bravo!

Answer 6

In this case, your acrostic made you reach for broader vocabulary, especially with the two Z's. Well done.

Answer 7

Lovely poem, and yes vertigo is the culprit who kept me from become a pilot, and flying airplanes.  They said with the degree of my vertigo, I would fly into the ground and not know it til I hit.  I have to use mirrors in my cars, if I turn my head sharply I will get disoriented for a few seconds.

Answer 8

i didnt get dizzy

but i spun on the lesson!

the last line ..determination

any dream's perfect focus.