Do you feel it?

Question

i should have seen it coming

but it was too beautiful.

i should have known about it

but it is so bright.

i shouldnt be standing here,

but it woke me this morning.

i should have seen it coming,

Life.

Answer 1

I am very impressed with this one. Your poetry has been moving upwards for some time now. Even though I can't always comment, I read your postings. This one has power.

Answer 2

well  this isnt really a question but a ok poem i guess

Answer 3

This poem didn't have enough substance for my liking!  This only my opinion, and everyone is different!  So sorry guess I didn't feel it!  Cheers!!

Answer 4

cute poem, not the greatest writing but playful, no question though!!!

Answer 5

This is just precious! So cute!