Do you feel like I do ?

Question

Just Like Me

You think you’re special not like the rest

Listen closely as I am here to attest

You’re just another plebe taking up space

All as equals mere rats in the race

Look in the phone book pick any name

It doesn’t matter which they’re all the same

All alike no difference will you find

Trying to get ahead while falling behind

Malleable forms of Carbon-14

Tainted gray matter no one is pristine

Seas of humanity covering the earth

Angrily trying to take their share worth

Nine to fivers doing just as they are told

Each has a price to be bought or sold

A tug of war of turds to get what they need

Each victimized by their own blind greed

But wait I am special you’re not like me

How lost and ignorant can you truly be

The truth awaits you look in the mirror

Stare a little harder now is it clearer

You’re just a visitor passing through

Open up your eyes and get a clue

About as unique as a leaf on a tree

Pay attention now you’re just like me

Answer 1

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... GOOD!

Answer 2

Are you christian?

LOL

Both negative and positive at the same time.

Hhhhhmmm. Interesting.

Answer 3

Welcome to puberty...

Every teenager goes through the same feelings.

Been there; Done that!

g-day!

Answer 4

Sounds good but some of the syllables need tidying up.

Really good poem though.

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Answer 5

I can from time to time see that image. What separates? Soul! Hope! Faith! and Love! All of which society tries to take from us.     That's why it so important to win that war. Be different! Stand from the crowd and show your inter spirit.

Answer 6

The scansion needs a bit polishing, but it's good.