Do you guys like my poem??

Question

On the hard stone floor Orfwald lay

Above him the beast he was trying to slay

the beast gave a shrieking cry

all who hear it are doomed to die

but Orfwald's soul did not give

he struggled and struggled to try to live

the beast thought it had won

it did what had to be done

but it didnt know that orfwald would not die today

even though it will try as it may

with a strangled cry orfwald stood

his sword in his right hand as it should

he swung it towards the beasts neck

it his and sunk in with a loud 'theck'

Orfwald stood victorious over the beast

glad he had not been turned into a feast

do u guys liike it???

Answer 1

its good! but wtf is an orfwald?

Answer 2

yeh its good but what sirt of name is Orfwald???