Do you guys like this poem I wrote to/about my cousin? It's called End The Quarrel?

Question

End The Quarrel

We’ve spent fourteen years hating each other

And we argued quite a bit

I feel like I’ve missed out on knowing a great and truly beautiful person

By avoiding conversation and saying cruel words to you

I have an everlasting debt owed to you

And am willing to do anything to repay you

I say we end this little spat that we have

And forget it ever happened

There wasn’t really ever a reason

For our fourteen year long bicker-fest

I propose we start over

And give this thing another shot

Hello, my name is Jake

And you are?

Answer 1

it's awfully sweet. not my type of poem, because i like ones filled with description and metaphors, but it's cute and thoughtful. thanks for commenting on mine :D