Do you guys like this poem?

Question

It's a poem about creatures of the night and the need to hunt without control...It's a bit creepy....(Vampires) It's title is Frover Trapped.

Sorry if you don't like I don't write poetry very often and I'm only 14...I'm still learning.....

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Forever-Trapped.227959

Answer 1

That made me sad.

So no, i don't like it.

Answer 2

It's very good for a beginner poet =]

is it about twilight lol? i ♥ twilight!

keep on writin'!

Answer 3

i really like it, trust me its really good, but a little sad:)

The stanza, though, you wrote "an guidance" supposed to be "a guidance" but that didn't change at all the way I thought about the poem:) It was really good. Keep Writing!

Hope that Helps

♥ Bella ♥

Answer 4

Wow! I like it! Greaaat job!!! :):):)