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Do you have any suggestions? do you like my story?

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I wrote a fantasy novel about this girl demi who was adopted by two rich people who were nice and kept her comfort after her parents death. they never told her how they died but soon she found out herself. she had found a stick somewhere o n the ground and once she grabbed it she was cursed or now she will die, thats what ppl told her. if she grabs it she gets to see deaths that happend by the ZUFU, the stick she found. sheldon, her step dad told her that there was some man called everex and he had been born without being a baby first. he was born as a man. he was powerful but he orgianlly created the zufu and now many rarely ppl find the zufu and die from it. now demi is scared to death that she WILL die but her step dad said he went to look for the zufu once and now she is going to look for everex and the zufu and figure out everything. she wants to kill everex since he was the reason the zufu killed people and she would murder him but she thinks she can face her fears and now shes going alone on a hourney to find the zufu and find everex......to be continued.....do you like it? and can you please give me suggestion....im lost now

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  1. OMG--how many plots & subplots do you have going on here?  By the time I was halfway through I'd forgotten my name!


  2. holy c**p that is confusing.... haha but it seems good, i'd love to read it, email me it or something! :)

    do you like mine????   http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

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