Do you have any suggestions on how to improve this wacky packages blog?

Question

http://wacky-packs.blogspot.com/

Answer 1

Mmm, Steve, I like it!

I like the clean, fresh sparkly layout.

- You could personalize the design a bit more - it speaks of generic, mass templates.

- the embedded YouTube needs a better selection of keywords (when I peaked it had no videos showing).

- consider putting your primary content above the fold (e.g. one of the first things we see) so we don't need to go looking for it

- if you are more careful about the keywords you use in headings, the first words in paragraphs and in the alt text on images, your google ads will be more targeted to your content.

Hope that all helps!

But I like your easy-to-remember domain name. I like your photos. And I like your original concept. Great work!

I run a site on how to create blogs, have a peak sometime:

http://www.lillymouse.com

Answer 2

Hi Steve

I visited the page and looks pretty good to me.

Keep up the good work.

Good Luck to you.