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Do you have headaches sometimes?

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Please don't look at me like that?

..........Multi Headed Hydro

.........This grotesque figure

..........Shoulders slumped

..............Crooked spine

.................Don’t look

....................Please

..........This burden of beauty

............ Fractured fractals

.............. Closing closer

.................. Centered

.................... .Core

.................... Please

.................. Don’t look

...............Here I can be me

............ Kept in here I am safe

...........How could I ever step out

......... Lonesome leering at myself

........Misshapen skulls tangled mass

.....Spinning top amidst the twisted triad

..Quadratic formulae spewing out resolutions

Buried under this granite gift he hides his heart

......................©rad080908.........

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  1. Another self portrait!  This is interesting to me, geometry, fractured fractals...You can run, HP, you can't hide your heart.


  2. yes

  3. .................................I

    ..............................came

    .............................looked

    .......................read your words

    ...................formulated this answer

    ......................not bad, not bad

    ........................aspirin please

    .............................seeing

    ...............................dots


  4. Yep!  You're right in the middle of doodling some interesting forms!

  5. Your good! I tried shaping a poem one time on Y!A. I have no idea how you did it. lol

    I don`t agree; You do not hide your heart! I don`t see how. Great Job!

  6. By shrouding yourself in disclaimers and fractals of yourself, you show your heart.

    What monster had no heart...however wicked and evil...ah! The downfall into the true nature of the beast!

  7. The "crew cut" looks good on you :-)

  8. I actually haven't had a headache or migraine in about six years... O_o

  9. mmmmmmmmm, nice!

  10. I posted a poem in early daze YA about insomnia in the form of a Z and foolishly thought the cut and paste would secure the format - alas it did not. peeved me severely.

    A poem of mine about life in a bookshop justified central to look like a sole of a shoe and a poem about a ghost walking through an art gallery, once centrally aligned ended up looking like the silhouette of a bust of a head on a pedestal. I love accidental format and brilliant shapes like this one rad. You da Pro, Bro!

    Thou Dragon with many heads......you can run, but you can't hide!

    Seriously good stuff Radman!

  11. Your poem

    ..........is

    ..............unique

    .................artistic

    ....................the reason

    ..........why poetry

    ............ still is alive

    .............. keep on writing


  12. WOW! You made me dizzy, but I had fun along the way!

  13. We love geoms on this site. Yahoo fights them tooth and nail, but they can be reformatted in Word.

    Poets can never hide their hearts. Other poets read behind the veil.

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