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Do you have time for 3 short terse lines?

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Truth is our fountain

water cleansing souls and minds

'til we become one.

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  1. cool water of truth

    soothes the dryness of  seekers

    wan'dring the desert


  2. If true then prepare

    Waters of force are coming

    We shall be cleansed

    How's that BMG?

  3. The truth shall make you free - but I do not know about ONE.  That might only be achieved when all can take - the truth - without reservations and self ego preservation. The truth - by itself - may not have the healing power - be able to cleanse. ♥

  4. Yes I like it, and I think truth does have the power to cleanse. I think you also need governments to tell the truth for there to be genuine democracy and I think there should be penalties (jail) for members of government who don't. The media as well really.

    I prefer one to free, though I would be inclined to go for  - ' til we see clearly. Total unity of thought in a people would worry me.

    When I first read it I thought you mean't that soul and mind would become one, and I liked that interpretation aswell.

  5. Astro-terse, like in the Marsdome?

  6. Well truth is not everything and certainly wont make us one. . .

  7. This sounds like haiku, is this what you were going for? I do like the message! Cheers!

  8. What a great epitaph!

  9. The fountain broken,

    water water everywhere

    dive in, water's fine.

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